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Scene: May 1926

May 1926

After graduating from the University of California, Berkeley, five friends headed to the north coast to celebrate. They would not return. Mendocino.

When California was explored by the Americans and Europeans, they left behind destruction and blood.

The native populations were eliminated.

In one region of California, the natives fought back successfully and came to an understanding with the Californians.

The Americans were not to hunt ot use the land within the region of Big River, or the truce would be nullified, and the war would continue.

Mendocino.

Big River (the Mendocino War).

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[sound of boots in & out of water]

When California was explored by pioneers in the 19th century, the Americans left behind destruction and blood.

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The native populations were effectively eliminated.

[black / water sound]

In one region of California however, the native tribe successfully fought back.

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The tribe reached and agreement with the pioneers.

[black / water sound]

If Californians trespassed along the Big River, the treaty wold be nullified, and the war would continue.

[black / water sound]

In May 1926, five friends graduated from the University of California, Berkeley, and went to celebrate along the north coast.

[black / water sound]

They would not return.

[black / water sound]

[Camera peels back to show a man walking thigh-high in a river, he has a fishing pole. There is a valley of trees on both sides of the river. a shot is fired, the man is hit on the shoulder, falls into the water.]

[From behind, the entrance of the water is deafening. When he comes up the noise of chaos, friends hollering, birds flying, animals scurrying.]

[The man gets shot again, in the upper chest, he falls back into the water. From behind, the fall into the water is deafening, no sound. When man comes up for air, the sound of chaos, water splashing, men yelling, animals.]

[The man gets shot again in the throat, when he falls in the water, silence deafening, blood, the screengoes black.]

Mendocino. –> credits

New Scene.

Cala (?), river, immediate gunshot, view from other angle, a friend’s point of view, He looks for shooter, high in the hills overlooking river, then he takes off running. Through the woods, pushing away branches, jumping over logs. He is running towards the campground, to get his gun. The sound of two more gunshots, his friends screaming and yelling. He is running for his life.

Cut back to scene in the river, another friend grabs his shotgun, was on the shore, on a rock, looks up towards hill, where shooter apparently is, man killed in background, other friends frantic, blood in the river, friends do not know to help or get out.

The friend picks up his gun, starts shooting return fire. Two shots.

Cut back to man in woods running, he gets to the campsite, can see it from above on overhead shot, then stops suddenly. The look of freight in his eyes/face, death is upon him.

A quick flash of an image, an image of a native, filled with revenge, painted, adorned, ready to kill, knife in hand. The sound of knife thrown, the face of friend, he gets killed. Silence.

Cut back to river scene, man shooting gun – twice more, the other two friends go ashore, looking for items, the attack seems to be over, they don’t know it. The friend with the shotgun comes ashore, they make their way to camp. End of scene.

Scene: Hotel Entrance

Background.

In 2003, a privileged slacker graduates with an MBA and takes a management position at one of his uncle’s motel chains.

Scene.

Late mid-morning, maybe 11am. A windowed lobby in the front of the hotel. A paved driveway and parking lot are immediately outside. A large wooden front desk, absurdly ornate for a Holiday Inn, with a young man behind. He is the front desk clerk. He is all alone. Early 20s, longer hair, hints of a hippie, but not so matter-of-fact. His gold-colored name tag says “Jack.” He is on the office phone, a long off-white coil cord stretches from the handset to the desk.

Jack [on the phone, in a Northern California rural twang]: No, I’m telling you, I was whacked, completely fucked. It was awesome. [Listens.] No, fuck no, I told you I don’t care. [Listens.] I don’t give a shit, what the fuck is wrong with you? [Listens.] Nah, fuck you. You’re whacked, you know that?

The main character enters the lobby, the lobby door’s movement alerts the motion detector, and the digital bell rings. Jack turns his shoulder ever so slightly. He is leaning back in his chair, his phone tucked between his head and shoulder. He needs to end the conversation, and isn’t upset about it. This is his job, and he enjoys it.

Jack [listening on the phone]: Alright… yea, well… yea, alright mom, well I’ve got to go. Yea, I’ll talk to you soon. [He hangs up the phone.]

Jack stands up and greets the stranger.

Jack: How may I help you today?

Unfinished scene.

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Scene: Chosen Prince

Background.

The ruling class of the “true humans” modeled themselves after the historic ruling families that existed on Earth for hundreds of thousands of years. Following the death of the Prince (whose position is similar to that of a Prime Minister), the son of King Durnal, the prince to succeed him must be chosen.

Scene.

The King sits in his lounge on a big deep chair. The room is dark with thick stone walls, similar to Roman times. All light is natural through sunpaths installed in ceilings that allow natural sunlight into the rooms. The King (Durnal) is a stately man, powerful, wise, however hesitant. His weaknesses show on his face, in wrinkles and sweat. His hair is damp and greying. The shot is from his upper-chest and up. He is shirtless. King Durnal sighs. “Humanity…” he slowly says in a monotone voice, letting the words draw out for seconds. He says it with pain and fear.

His wife, Queen Lue, a beautiful young woman, stands partially nude in the doorway of the room. The bright sun from beyond here makes her appear all black, hidden in the shadow of her own beauty. She cuts him off immediately, “Humanity was destroyed long ago.”

Camera pans in on the king, pensively thinking and rubbing his eyes in frustration. The camera pans back, the wife moves forward. It becomes obvious the two are naked and have just finished making love. She kneels in front of his chair, laying her head on his thigh, an effort to console the worried king.

The “true humans,” aided by science, have been able to speed up gestation in order to increase their population. The number of children the king has spawned is unknown. The idea of family has greatly decayed over time. Humans, in their small numbers, now consider their entire species their “family.” The new Prince will not be one of the king’s offspring. The leading candidate is Apollo, who is not a pure “true human.”

Queen Lue: “He would be wonderful,” speaking of Apollo.
King Durnal: “And what is he..?”
Queen Lue: [She hesitates.] “Fifth generation,” she spits out his birth lineage to the “humatas.”

The king grimaces. He has considered mighty Apollo as his own son. He has always resisted any efforts to promote any humata, despite any distant lineage, however. Science at this time stated that seventh generation humatas were effectively true humans. The extremist true humans didn’t concur. They did agree with the practice of increasing their population and cross-breeding with humatas, but they distrusted any “effectively-true human” with humata blood, as was the case with Apollo. But Apollo was different, the strongest of the candidates, the tallest and brightest. Durnal knows this. Lue knows this. The future of “humanity” was at stake. Apollo is currently stationed in northern Asia as ambassador to the tribal humans and oversees war operations on the northern front.

Camera pans to the king’s face, who continues to ponder the future and is briefly hesitant to accept the inevitable and obvious. His wife gets up, a sense of accomplishment across her face, and begins to walk towards the door, nude. The deliberations were over. A new prince had been crowned.

End of scene.

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